Martial Arts System - Reviews

i was rlly loving it, and just when i was about to purchase the privileges, i opened the chapter 174.. and droped... that was the worst decision i ever saw of an author.. im rlly rlly sad about it and if i could i wold just complain in everysingle fckng chapter trying to change your mind, but i wont use my fastpasses and coins in smthing so stupid.

5 stars until chapter 174, 0 stars after it, i will just give a 2,5

The story is pretty cool. If I had to point out one problem, it would be the fact that the dialogue between the characters are a lil bit forced, but it's alright... also please give more updates the cliffhangers are literally causing me immense mental, physical, and astral pain.

this is great to read but sadly author du...mped it ... i hope he will restart this.............................................................

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Still in my heart number 1 don't care what people say. hope you return soon.
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My first Review

I understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough.

After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a".
For example:
captian instead of  The captian
young man instead of a or the young man said...
Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:""

Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused.

I had high hopes for this novel.
Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.

quite disappointed in the author he doesn't even have the guts to write what he wanted......changing the story midway because of a suggestion quite a good story though...but the author

It some personal dislike but first guy recive quest to some push-ups and so on, he have no trained body at all but he with his will do 100 of them somehow(it even written that 20 push-ups was his limit that get him weak arms) why not 10000 in the first time if his will only matter ? But it not worst thing, he trained and got some stats growed passively, and after one training he finished quest and got rewarded he got some stat points and he spend it all, why? Man have 15 years of new life experience that he spent By playing games he does not ask about drowbacks of it, will it limit stat growing in the furure or some of that thigs, btw man know about novels with and systems from previous life so he must think of it first. Is he stupid or just have some brain damage or he can not think about future grow idk. As i said probably personal dislike, i think mc is stupid.

I really loved the story and got hooked to this one.... until I read the last chapter... i was looking forward to his tournaments and how all the four kings came to be know as true kings as stated by author. was this tournament the point in story where they got their names recognized ??? other characters of secret geniuses and the whole story about the craziest man alive will he be of any help to ichiro or not .... i guess these are all unanswered questions i am left with. I hope to see the 2nd volume soon, and hopefully you find the motivation to write it. also greatly anticipated ichiro vs arkenthym.

SPOILER: This is only part one of a novel that has yet to be fiinished. After reading the author's final comments at the end of the novel, I can now understand while it was lacking in many areas. I liked the MC who wasn't OP and lived the morally gray area. It think the MAS was extremely under utilized and, too me, barely mattered in the MC's journey unlike most related novels. The lack of closure  is also disappointing but I underrstand the author's reason. For a 1st novel, it was a decent start. I definitely liked the author's White Online novel much better. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future.

I remember waiting for the weekly chapters…look how they massacred my boy

Is this worth it to read even though it's not finished?