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Over rated trash don't need to read it to know that.Webnovel drop this *****Webnovel drop this *****Webnovel drop this *****Webnovel drop this *****Webnovel drop this *****

Would have been better if MC wasn't so evil This kind of 'evil hypnotism' is one of the most common tropes seen japanese hentai. I like the concept but I hate this kind of story development. What I mean is, why should MC make the girls as his slaves? Why not into lovers? What's point in having s*x all day? That's just pure wish fulfillment. This could have more realistic and could have been made into a unique and popular novel if the MC wasn't a sadist pervert. Just think about having hypnotizing powers and use it destroy your enemies and not ur loved ones.

Sadly I never enjoy flawed systems and insanely stupid MC's. Eve knowing her family's power and tactics would never advocate her name like that so overall this is a great dissapointment in story direction.

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Great job! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :DThis is an outstanding story I am really excited to see where it leads! :)

i have to say this, you have read this one.i am not a huge fan of cultivation yet i like this one because the plot is realy interesting .how come anyone be not interested after reading the auxiliary chap, it hooked me right away.i found it difficult for me to keep up with the chinese names, But it was not that big of deal, the mc' character is very deep and relatable.give it a chance , you will enjoy it

it gives a little of shadow slave's vibes  mmm it has potential to say it seemed like everything is planned from the author let's see.....

I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!

I have just read a few chapters and I have nothing bad to say. The story was a good. Nice premise. I want to call it origina but so smooth I don’t know if it is an uncommon precedence. The story surprised me in the beginning and does not look like your typical face slapping, unrealist MC or I shall dominate the heavens charscter.I like the relatable and calm MC and his boss

Great read and keep updating. The female lead is a very strong character...i love here

They were in a dark realm of some kind. Different shades of purple and black filled the space around them. They were standing atop a circular disc that was floating in mid air. The circular disc was the size of a large arena stage. Damien and Ryouma looked around in wonder. Arata was impressed. It was a Minor Realm. This was their training area, their very own Minor Realm. Visha was looking at Kushaiah, who was still sitting on a chair balanced on the two back legs. He had somehow moved into the door with them on his chair, yet no one had seen him move. Visha squinted his eyes.