Manhattan After Midnight

I really liked your description it's quite good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.. Looking forward to it.

Poor story overall, though it has an interesting premise. There's an overall lack of tension. Basically, the story reads like a summary or report, not that that's all that different from so many other stories on this website or in this genre.

Well i really want to read everything here its just that i am too poor to afford the coins as i cant use money because im still a child? xd

love it so far ive read up to chap 19 and can see it being a very entertaining story to read. granted you would need to like this stereotype of novel

33 chapter review~So, basically a simping novel, the mc gets accepted as a direct disciple and needs to be filial to his master to get DP (Devotion Points), with that he can buy a lot of things.Well, mc isn't retarded like the other mcs and buys skills to further improve his devotion to his master to earn even more DP.Well, maybe some will be confused because they skim through but of 33 chapters only 3 days passed by so don't get confused.Also, the mc is quite strong even though he is a mortal (Due a factor but you will know it if you're going to read this novel)There are several things mentioned from the background but I can't really remember it. They did explain the power levels and all the general info about sects and such, also the world is plagued by wraiths who are the bane of cultivators and they need to find a way to deal with them apparantly.Romance? Probably and most likely his master, more love interest? There is one but I'm not sure, if some seniors know if this novel is going to a harem do tell me... Pls.Translation Quality: 5* (Smooth like baby hands in my fridge)SoU: 5* (Trial Read)Story Development: 4* (At this point it's just devotion to his master and the wraith part)Character design: 4* (Solid personalities)World Background: 3.5* (I know it can't be 3.5* but meh, it's not 3 but also not 4)Total score: 4.2Personal Rating: 4.5

So far the greatest thing about this novel is... Honesty.. On what the author wants to see and the theme of the novel.I mean. There is no diluting .. No like waste of time.It's still what some may call cringe worthy but i don't care.It's like a drawing of something good but.. i I mean the "technique" still has a lot space to develop.Emm. Man don't worry about critiques.. the way to grow as a writer is to basically; actually write what you want to see. But author. Keep it up. If this is not the last thing you write. And your keep your words honest. You gonna improve. A lot. In the best.