Making The Alpha Submit (BL) - Reviews

Original and fantastic story...unusual relationship between detective and killer...the both of them are smart...the characters are not only transmigrators...alive or dead...they have chance go to the new world..everything is connected

I can just appreciate that you write such a good book!I just loveeee it?❤️------Soooo I catched up with with the chapters and can say that the book is really well written as well as the character design. The Mc is pretty Badass and knows what he is doing (in terms of survival and not women...*caugh*caugh* Amandla) and the side characters are as well pretty damn good(execpt Francis he is not my type characteristically because I find him a bit annoying). I would love too she Lazar keep growing and find new powers! Keep up your great work Author-san and happy new year and enjoy your holidays! ?❤️

It reminds me of a certain novel that reached the top of webnovel and that excites me, I hope I don't let it fall. If I can make a request please that the mc adopted the style of the mc of that novel.( I know you know what it is).?

Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read? Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp  Exp Exp Exp Exp

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Soooo much oH my god its sooo good. Please dont drop tHis webnovel. Please

It’s a good story, worth reading,but it loses our coz things are predictable cliches, at times, and my goddess Khione isn’t back yet either ??

When the Katana approached me while flying I  caught it in midair and strangely when my hand touched the sword my horns broke down into reiatsu and got absorbed by it and the sword started to change the scabbard became covered in black bandage with an ice blue second handle at the base of the scabbard (hole for the sword), I took out the blade and was surprised to see it completely black with a ice blue Hamon (Edge pattern) in the shape of wave the Tsuka Ito (Cord wrap around the handle) was an ice blue color like the one on the scabbard, the Kashira (Pommel) was made of pale dark grey metal, the Tsuba (Guard) was a pale dark grey metal with a pale ice blue gleam in the form of 4 four pointed star (Shuriken). I understood it was an Asauchi now zanpakuto, and it was now mine.

"...Well shit. Can I get the degraded Ootsutsuki bloodline for the Hyuuga for free then? Oh, and a new way to get System Points?"

Head: Empty

I step out of the elevator only to crash into someone. "I am sorry sir let me help you pick these up." I gather the papers to hand to him but my legs turn to jelly.

"welcome to my body. i was once a person a mortal in every way. however my body was sacrificed to transfer my consciousness to this massive machine. i can process information with multiple selves the slowest self works at a speed of 500x a average person. the total speed is 17.89 trillion the average person. or 5673 centuries in a second. however the part of me, the main one talking to you. my consciousness to be exact operates at 600x the average person. so a single second is 10 minutes for me. oh and this is only the main section of me, my mind so to speak. the size is equivalent though i estimate my mind to be 1.3x the size of your capital princess. making my whole body a machine the size of all the elven cities in your kingdom combined." he spoke slowly so i could digest the information.

And all that glitters is gold