Major Project: Tartarus - Reviews

The writing of the author suggests that he is a 30 year old vir*in who is using this book as a platform to release his se*ual fantasy thus destroying the story line. As seen by the first 40 chapters the book is more than 1/4th po*n

I'm certain most of us had high expectations on this. But this has killed my brain cells a lot and I can't heads or tails of it. The Main Character is most displeasing and the world-building is horrible. I'm beyond speechless here. It is difficult to describe my disappointment atm to be honest.

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Awesome plotline. Your idea of making the kali (Antagonist) believe in himself that he is the prophesized savior when he is supposed to be the prophesized evil and destroyer of world, is making me hopeful for the story. Keep it up.

Love how the story is progressing so far

King looked like it wanted to protest until the last question pop out and caught its interest.  Rolling side to side for a moment, the penguin golem finally rolled on its back before King bounced back to its feet.

Lee was still pressing the assault, mauling Orochimaru badly as the snake sannin had underestimated the unassuming genin until the martial artist had closed to deadly ranges - and not let up a second since then. Dozens of techniques got tried by the sannin, most of which got interrupted rather rudely as the green clad boy pounded him with enough force, from enough angles, to send him careening around like a pinball, only to get met and pounded on again by the dangerously supercharged genin.

"…Why do you care anyway?" The sounds of rustling echoed within the room. "You already left me before."

The student happily agreed. He carefully and tenderly took the badge, and then he walked off the platform in extremely high spirits.

They have to hurry up, Jiraiya cannot take care of Pain for long enough time neither can anyone else take care of S-rank shinobi's for so long, not to mention that fake Uchiha and the white and black ones are a huge threat on themselves

I would love to hate him truly and as deeply as I should, but he always had held some sort of control over me, enough that I still found comfort on his embrace and his musky smell, a nostalgic feeling, almost like coming back home.