Magicless, Magician - Reviews

I LOvE ThIS NOvEL ( A novel yandere?!? )____-_-_______________:) ___________* *_____________________=_=_____________%?#____________________

the story is so-so not exactly a revolutionary novel. ive not found that many good "player to npc" novels, and its fine to pass the time.i will give credit where its due, so far the action the mc makes are usually fairly logical, i dont sit 50% of the time asking why the mc i dumb.character interactions arent quite as limited as i first thought eg between him and players, there is various means to make contracts with players given certain conditions etc.overall the novel is written well enough but it does nothing exceptional so there is really not much to draw in the reader and is generally not worth spending money ontranslater has done an excellent job though so god speed to him/her

If you want to read novel and feel depressed then read this,it started very good but soon due to starting of patreon a story which should have been very enjoyable turned out very depressing story...

Please continue, so far Im loving the idea, how you made Fresh, and Im honestly exited at what he will dk next, will he be good or bad, just explore and do nothing? Or meaby find so.e big secret about AUs? Also wondering what would happen if he meets any Gasters or other characters like flowery or chara. Overall, amazing, must read, trust me, I too was skeptical at first, thinking whether this was good or bad, but now having read it I can confidently say that it is amazing with a great original plot forming. Keep up the good work author.

I thought it must be a isekai shit but no it's more than that. I really loved the narration style it's not your classic old school baritone but the urban touch is cool. I am really looking forward on reading the story. however I think the quality of literature can be a bit better.

8 released chapters start off pretty slow, later on it gets infinitely better as pacing picks up. Personally it's my favorite book and I think it will change the trend of cultivation books forever

Nobody noticed this silent communication between them.And Devid eventually escaped from his sudden doom.

"Hah! Same…"I sensed an awkwardness through the phone. Maybe being an ass isn't a good idea."Sure you're doing alright?"I give her reassurance that I'm okay."Well, alright-ah, hey!"I heard some scuffling from the other side of the phone. I sensed an evil presence before she even started talking.

"What's that glowing thing on his chest!"

"I remember," she said, piercing gaze locked on his. "You saved me?"

And finally, it happened. A baby had been born, a baby with such a high level of energy, it broke their scouters. Devices that were created to detect ones power level, and could go up to a power level of 12 000. Not many races could give birth to such powerful baby. Which actually stunned the Tuffles a little since they didn't know why he was so strong.

So to find proof, she welcomes me with a smiling face when I come to visit. But she can't find evidence, nor avoid be enjoyed by me.