Mafia’s Little Dove - Reviews

Mafia’s Little Dove
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Wow this book is amazing ,I love the grammar ,the plot everything was okay and I loved reading all the chapters so far can't wait to read more chapters if I get time ,I highly recommend this book , PLEASE DO CHECK OUT ON THIS BOOK and read it !!!!!!!
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Good Recommendations Thanks                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                
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The concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one. But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one.Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really? This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.
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Your story really builds the suspense pretty well and the pace is just right. It feels like a really well thought plot. I was left with so much questions and wanting to know more... so intriguing. I love mystery stories.There are some gramatical little errors but it is a great start author. Please keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more! ?
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finally a novel where the mc is not a male,i cant find any of these anywhere
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It was then that Chang Xiuying received a loud notification from Xue that he finished the rush download of the high-grade shapeshifter and ready to be retrieved from the pedestal.
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The flames started to swirl and slither around the user like a snake. Slowly, it spread all over his body, transforming into a set of clothes. A black tunic and pants with a pair of boots and gloves, all of which had bright red designs. A small spark suddenly entered the youth's eye, causing him to flinch.
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