Lover's Language - Reviews

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If you dropped this story let me know. I've been waiting for 22 days for the next chapter, (I was 2 days late to the latest chapter) and you haven't posted since.

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The story seems like it was written by a teenager.The direction, flow everything is cliche and cringe as fk.So many predictable things in this story that I feel like the author is inexperienced in plot making.

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complicated. after 40 chapters, I still didn’t fully understand the structure of the world and I hardly understand it, it coexists at all. And so it’s almost an ordinary Chinese young master hitting unbelieving faces ...

[The First Volume] Just short of 5 stars.STORY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). The story is mediocre and can be best described as uninteresting but understandable.Pros:*There are clear objectives*well-defined setting*Imaginative details.Cons:*Slow-paced tells your generic plot. Thirty chapters for three plot points; doesn't happen as much in later volumes.WORLD BACKGROUND ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). What were they doing while they were speaking, what environment are they in, how cold is the water? Long descriptions are a no-go, but no descriptions are worse than that. They do try though, in the first volume where he was in the cave, they had descriptions and so on, but things get cloudy when the wording comes into play.WRITING QUALITY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (four stars). It isn't that bad; there are some issues with the wording here and there, but everything's grammatically correct.UPDATE STABILITY ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars).CHARACTER DESIGN ⭐️⭐️⭐️ (three stars). There isn't much attention to other characters apart from the main character, but I hear it gets changed later.

Have you ever wondered what it would be like if someone made a Chinese parody of the Fallout series? This is pretty much it. The author pretty much rips the world background of the Fallout series and pastes it in his novel. Some things are rewritten but 90% of the core lore of the Fallout series is there untouched. It's Fallout : China Edition Points heavily deducted for the author not being able to create his own world. Putting a *very* light spin if at all (most of the lore is pretty much left untouched) is bad. Character design is the standard stuff you'd see in about any generic novel. (Harem building, heroines swooning over MC without effort, magical plot device, etc) It is still too early to judge the story as of 12 chapters but all the red flags are there telling anyone that this novel is just another drop on the bucket.

I'm lying in the small alley like a beggar with tattered clothes and wound in every part in my body.

Today is going to be the first order of business. Getting used to the house. By playing hide and seek. And the limit? None. I didn't even get the courtesy of hiding first. I had to find HIM. In a house with three floors. Might as well call this mission impossible.