First of all, I would like to congrat the author for all the update and the writing quality. There isn't too much repeating and the reading is fluid.However I must say that I found the character design of All the characters without any exception absolutely tasteless , you can say that I'm quite harsh but it's the truth, there is no surprise or depth in any character.Then I find that this story is quite quick because I think the "Cultivation " system is extremely simple and make you wonder why all the world is at tier 4 or more, because it's extremely quick to advance and the fight don't seem difficult, you don't feel any struggle from the protagonist .Then I think come the weakest spot of this novel, the World background. I feel everything in the World revolve around the MC that, without him the rest of the World would be boring, we know 2 of the 5 great families from the start and they don't seem important at all, and the rest is blur.The problem is that you can't enter in the World of the author because nothing is explained, you feel left out.Those are the major lines of my criticism, if you read, you might feel them, omnipresent, behind what is described.That's why I don't feel confortable when reading this novel.There is room for improvement and potential. Now we only need the author to exploit this potential.