Lost Mage - Reviews

it's a cool story. Can be unnecessary sometimes with the crafting parts sometimes but they're usually good. I don't like non solo novels. Carrying a team and having to train them is annoying to me but this story makes up for it with it's unique take on VRMMOs. I like it

There's a bit too much brackets that it felt hard to read in thge bginning, but now I'm 7 chapters in, it had kind of grown on me...the main lead character was a bit too hyper i think, he thinks to himself too much...but i guess it must be the character design by the writer.

I'm far too lazy to write a remotely good review at all so I'm just giving 5 stars to show the author that I love the book, I also, love watching Lenny get through insane predicaments I love the macabre acts and scenes within the book, I love how you(the author) progressed in writing skills, you went from a decent, novice writer to being able to pull me into your book like it was real stuff, a word of advice tho, please please lower the amount of words used to describe things in the current chapters, no offense as of rn most of the chapters words are descriptions for 1-2 attacks, I would keep rambling but I don't wanna seem like a jerk, but peace author, love the book yo

"Do a background check on them. I want all related information." said the first voice while sighing.

Walter concluded during their previous short exchange that the man in front of him was a combination of inferiority complex and bloated ego.

Deidei stops everything and turns around slowly.

"Yeah, you said you were going to the city. right?" She replied as she picked some stuff up.

"125 years is only a drop in the ocean," the man shook his head. "I forgot to introduce myself. I'm God."

Hours or maybe it was just a few minutes later he woke up. 'My name is Astaroth!'. He felt as though his soul had fused and he could not differentiate one from the other. There was no need to because they were now one and the same. 'Astaroth, age 14, born in old holy city, son of Jack and Phoebe'.

I don't know why this novel is getting good reviews when I was just having fun with writing, but I'm glad that everyone's taking it well. Because of that! I'll be posting an extra chapter every time we reach a 100 power stones milestone! Also, send those summoning pens my way and I'll use them to the fullest ^-^ Thank you all so much for all your support and I hope you continue to want to read this novel while I continue to enjoy writing it. :) Sincerely,DaisukiDayoSenpai

Really nice story development tho slow at first but i like it!