I have to say that reading this brought a lot of nostalgia. It was only a few years ago that I've seen a the original charm of wuxia, xanxia, and all that.This is a throwback novel against all the system, sign-in, and overpowered stuff that is hip nowadays.It is funny that the nostalgia doesn't stop there. For people who read Machine Translations, this brings that vibe as there is still a lot of work that needs to be done with wording and all that. Spacing work needs a lot of polishing as well.I trust the author would improve on that and I could only advice to use Grammarly if he could.