The dialogue in this section is genuinely funny and each character has a distinct voice, which is no small feat when you're juggling a kitten protagonist, warrior fathers, a tribe chief, an old priest, and a livestream audience.
Ah Li's dialogue is perfect for a devoted but slightly simple father figure. 'Matsutake mushrooms… matsutake mushrooms…' when he's struggling to remember the name, his excited sneeze when the scallions hit his nose, his matter-of-fact description of chili peppers as 'the Devil's Land'—these are small details that make him feel real.
The tribe chief is all business but with warmth underneath. His quick decision to start building traps 'the next morning' shows a leader who acts. His conversation with the priest about passing the priesthood is where his political side shows, but even that is filtered through his relationship with the old man—they're comfortable enough to discuss serious matters without ceremony.
But the real star of the dialogue is the livestream comments. '[Zhou Zhou! Look, is that a green onion in front of you on the left?]' '[Left, left, oops, you passed it, Zhou Zhou, it's behind you on the left now.]' This is such a natural, chaotic, group-chat energy. It breaks the fourth wall without feeling gimmicky and gives us a collective voice that's equal parts helpful and chaotic.
And Shui Shui's line 'When Zhou Zhou drools, it means it's almost done'—that's the kind of line that makes you laugh out loud. It's practical, affectionate, and completely matter-of-fact in a way that feels like something a real person would say about a beloved figure.
The narrative voice itself is warm and slightly irreverent, never taking itself too seriously even when discussing serious topics like tribal oppression. That tonal balance is hard to pull off and the author does it effortlessly.