Story is good, i think chapter 11 is just like overlord right? And the characters are not really explained how they look exactly. It's kinda hard to imagine how they look like, i think you should explain them a little more detailed like for ex. Red long hair in a ponytail with white pale skin and a niceor sexy curve body with fierce personality. Something like like that, well i kinda like the story it's getting more interesting, also i wish the update gets stable. Hahaha just stating that comes to my mind so i could write something.