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excellent storyI love it, keep updating regularly, I can't wait to do the rest.good perssonage constructionupdate more remember please because I love this kind of novel
The ideas and world building were top-notched. You have such a creative imagination to make a good novel like this. With more exposure, this will become big. I like the characters and the plot. Also the flow was stable, not a bumpy ride for me ? Kudos! and good job!
Xin Fan's heart tightened. 'How did he know where I was?'. Xin Fan leaped out of the bush and closed in. However before he could get close, he felt a gut wrenching pain in his chest. Without any notice, he found himself shooting backwards. It was lucky that there was a large rock that absorbed the impact lest he fell off the mountain.
One was a man that could only be described as a 'grizzled' knight, wielding an executioner's sword and dressed in a spotless white armour. While the second was an old man who despite being rather portly exudes wisdom, a sceptre in his right hand while a robe covered the rest of his body.
The grey haired man, who looked to be in his early fifties, was covered in minor wounds, that spoke of a desperate fight against terrible odds, but were not necessarily lethal. However, something had torn a section of his throat out. Judging from the fact that blood was no longer flowing from any of his injuries, it was clear that the senior adventurer's heart was no longer beating.
