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**JD/AUTHOR* YOU DESERVE ALL THE FLOWERS! THERE ARE WRITERS IN THE WORLD & THEN THERE ARE INCREDIBLE WRITERS! YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. I USED TO HATE READING. YOUR WRITING MAKES ME FEEL EVERYTHING THAT YOU WRITE. YOU WRITE THE REAL EMOTIONS THAT ONE GOES THROUGH & WE FEEL IT ALL! MORE THAN 5 STARS

I've read the story on lnmtl. Amazing story.Other name: History's strongest husbandRaw name: 史上最强赘婿Status: 700 chapters (Completed)Novel update SummaryThe little handsome son-in-law passed through a world as a waste material and the husband of a wealthy family. But because of his lackadaisical aptitude, the wealthy family had driven him out. So he worked hard and found a more powerful family’s thighs to hold onto.Soon enough, he became the strongest son-in-law and husband in history.In this world, it was impossible to practice martial arts. It was futile so he might as well take advantage of his wife’s thighs and maintain a comfortable and leisure lifestyle.He’ll train his wife to become the strongest and best person in the world.“Whoever dares to provoke me, let my wife kill you!”

For me it's a no. Author writing some wet dream about 8yo surrounded by beauties (harem).............................................................

Just a disclaimer before everyone reads the novel and also a shameless 5 star review, because why not? Now let's take all of these aside and actually talk about the nitty-gritty of this review. I mean, I could not add any reasons as to why I gave my own novel a 5 star review, but it's better if there's a reason.The good things of this novel, or kinda? Still depends on your preferences in the end. But oh well, let's see.. Pros:t1. Dao of Sticc - Should I expound more on the greatness of the sticc? Yes, I shall expound. The greatness of the sticc lies on the fact that the upon looking at the sticc, everything suddenly doesn't matter anymore except the sticc. The sticc is da wae and it is everything. It's like weed but legal. ;) No FBI plz >..

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I have only just started reading this novel so I can’t comment on much, but I have noticed something I think the author should know. The writing in chapter 8 is pretty awkward. I could tell something was off in the previous chapters but I wasn’t able to pin point it until now. I finally realized the problem while reading the fight scenes of chapter 8. The tense frequently switches from past tense to present tense. One of the main rules in writing is to choose a tense and stick with it. Otherwise it makes the pacing of each scene feel all messed up and off. Going back and editing all of the chapters with conflicting tenses and converting them all into past tense would make the story flow a lot smoother and improve the general quality of the writing. I recommend past tense because it is the one more suited to this kind of story. If you would like specific examples of where I think these problems are and could be improved. I would be happy to help.

"Its creepy ..... whole mansion is ghostly silence we didn't find any intruder."

mental strength

نمی شد جلوشون موند.

she nodded  and sarutobi rushed up to her and hugged her "

Xiao Feng went to his father. "Father what's the matter?" He asked.