I Was Learning To Kill Gods in a Mental Hospital - Reviews

Nate should not be with Vivan

Everything is good and all. But the MC is too arrogant and mentally unstable at times. The author tried too hard to make him interesting but instead made him mental. And dude he is a 30 y/old in the inside so be should be calm and mature enough but heck no he behaves like a 3 year old. He has too much overconfidence .

While the story is held back by strange word choice, minor plot holes, clunky dialogue and foreshadowing that makes no sense until the pay off, The grammar is good for the most part, the characters are unique and the general premise of the story is good. One of the better web stories I've read in a while.

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Ok, now this is quite good for a change of pace, what else should I say, just read it, it's definitely worth your time... ?????????????

He should have not tell anyone is source of power

"You are my drug I'm hopelessly addicted to you, tonight we are starting our new life let's make it special I will worship you all night without any conditions. From today I will be having full control on you as I leave my part in you" "Shhhh" I put my finger on his lips.

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My heart wavered for just a moment when I remembered this but he took this chance to stand up as well and hold both my wrists. His eyes gazed into mine earnestly, pleading for an opportunity. His figure was towering over my short stature and I could only see red flags going off in my brain.

Elsa:sino sya anak?

Very nice book

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