Just Focus On Me - Reviews

I must say that I have been searching for a good novel combining the Modern Day world with Cultivation, they are rare and most that I found are sub par, but this one, well it's good.PROs:- A badass MC(I had enough of MC's that are cringe and unlikable or having to wait for character development, I prefer to hear the MC's story piece by piece) Check, - Cultivation in a modern world Check, - Harem that for many will be a turnoff, but I am fine with or without so Check- Good grammar, I don't have to stop to reread to understand what happens, with mistakes like a character's name in another place, that have no effect on the overall novel.CONs:- The world building can be worked on, until now we don't know too much about the overall world also how chi made it's way in the world or if was there since the immemorial.- For people that don't like Harems, I don't think it's for you, even if it's well done.Overall: A good read.

A historia e interesante eo desenvolvimento de muitos personagens e eveluçao lenta de personagens e uma trama misteriosa q voçe precisa ler varia vezes pra etender e 1 personagem principal banstante devertido

"What is it?" Kelly asked interestedly.

Sebastian: Yes, my young lord.

His self-questioning was interrupted by Tiana, who came and sit across of him. She wore a nightdress with mixed emotions on her face.

Shakily Simon leaned down and pressed his lips to hers. The heart in his chest exploded with love and he knew without a doubt she was the one. Neither of them had much experience in kissing but that didn't stop them as they greedily took in each other. All their combined fears and worries melted away as the kiss deepened. It was as if they were in a world all of their own...

He studied the man's rather pasty face, trying to decide what had bothered him about it.

greater blood magic

'Herald backs off quickly while turning to face who it may be.'

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

I stopped updating in the holes you'd all stop reading it.

First of all I find the novel good and honestly it's a bit early to write review but still , I read first 6 chs and from it I feel like powersystem (add a bit more elements ) can be improved a bit  as well as descriptions of mc doing things and the feelings of mc feels a bit bland but this are just small complaints as the novel is just getting started. Good work