Want everyone to know, some spoilers are mentioned.This is not a typical fight (or romance) of a three kingdoms setting. Nor does it seem to be a Romeo and Juliet thing. While some characters are developed early on, many are not flushed out until around the 800 mark. The world overview also tends to be over-simplified with vast overreaching vagueness. Some context is lost in translation and editing, along with those "Auto Correct" errors going by unnoticed. As for the thoughts, I feel that this story is only beginning to ramp up. As for specifics, I'll talk about more.First off are characters. As was mentioned, development is just slightly better than trash at the beginning. Some were given personality and others were just introduced with a vague background (Playboy, Wealthy, Common Person... etc). Point is, who was the real "villain" at the start? Clearly it felt like it was only building up the characters for the SIG story arc. Clearly, Kashawen is the overall villain thus far. Felt like she was thrown their and forgotten after the first Tita Star arc. Personal Thoughts are listed on Elite, Good (5* and 4*).Elite: Aina, Wang Zheng, Ye Zisu, Yan Xiaosu, Lin HuiyinGood: Zhang Shan, Runan, Meng Tian, Yue Jing, Snow Li, Ai XiaosluSecond (and Third) are both World Building and Story Development. There is really no way to separate them. Honestly, the loss at IG was actually a thought I had when I got to the selection for Solar System Federation. Seriously.That's not to say that it isn't good, but rather it seems fantastic when compared to other stories. The only downside I see is that there's no distinction between whose story is being told... There should be something to denote that (Author and Editor failure?). Otherwise, it feels like the underdog hero defeating opponents to win the princess' and in marriage... Wait there's one thing that I feel strongly about and that is this story is OBVIOUSLY centered on Wang Zheng's ascension to and reformation of the Rand Empire. If you go in depth, you understand that the nuance of all his breakthroughs are that the Rubik's Cube (and by extension, Bonehead and Charcoal) seem to be an amalgamation of all existing and future technologies and techniques. Within the last 50 chapters, this belief solidified even more so. Even better is the inferences that can be made from the title itself. The story is coming together as a whole which is why Development is higher than the World Building. Ideally, the only issue here is the complete trash excuse of WZ being sent to Tita (and consequently almost dying) just because Aina kissed him after "beating" Atlantis. Somehow though I managed to keep reading past that and wound up 50+ chapters a day.Overall, the translation can be read and could use some better editing. Updates do seem to be regular for now too.I would seriously recommend this to anyone s a must read and tell them to hang on between the IG and Elite Academy X arc. It just lacks a villain until SIG arc. Honest thoughts without much thinking though.
