Iris was reborn as Rosa. Rosa wants to change her fate with the knowledge of her past life. Her past memories may be what saves her in this game like fantasy world.
the synopsis that is supposed to tell us about the story says nothing at all...fillers: "why does the burger have less energy than the steak? the burger is in its ground state."
I like this story a lot.Stylish Demon can I help you by editing this story for you? I can help you fix it so the English is top-notch. I'll do it for free.
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How do you go from an amazing novel to absolute trash in one chapter. thats it one chapter was all it took to kill this book everything after that chapter is trash.
Clarity your writing needs Clarity. You have major show vs tell problems. Your dialogue needs work too. Trust me I've been there practice engaging the senses and inner thought and the story will shine
