Need a lot of room for improvement. But it's still a good novel. It's my own bias opinion, you should read before jumping on conclusion that the novel is not good just by looking at some random review.?
Writing was good. Concept of story and the way scenes were executed were also good. Nothing much to criticize, except for the story been very boring and plain. It's like eating nicely steamed and cooked bowl of plain rice everyday without any curry or side dishes.very boring.......
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I took some dragon killing and even A rankers can't kill them but it will be easy and the reward was 500 million for every dragon killed so I killed 12 dragons and went back
Horrible homing will only change the course of the skill by 1 inch every 1 meters it travels(yes Inches and meters. I am sorry for any who find this confusing as I use to use both in my everyday life it's just apart of me and I see them working together but they don't really without more work on other people's end. An Inches for those who don't know is roughly the top knuckle of your thumb to the tip of your thump. and a meter one male adult's large step or 39 inches ish remember this is roughly.)
Would say world development is bad but she is a shut in ? love the story so far want more stats though and just more chapters ?( needed more characters)
