The author has great creativity and wonderful story progression. So if you want a good read, this is a good story.However, i get easily taken out of the novel due to the constant mix up between past tense and present tense. I can hardly stand the usage of present tense in a novel.Please just choose one and roll with it. The first few chapters have really bad grammar. I don’t know if the writer is native english or not so I don’t want to judge. So I jumped to the middle of the novel and to the latest chapters. The grammatical mistakes improved somewhat which is good but they are still fairly noticeable. The writer still mixes up past and present tense by the end of it. Also, be sure to use commas in correct areas within sentences.I also think that instead of going into details on the materialistic aspect of the story such as appearance, go in-depth into the character's emotions. it's hard to relate to them without a better understandingThe novel has a good story. If you can get past the glaring mistakes, it should be a good way to pass the time.