Idol Misery Simulation - Reviews

So this has some huge amazing upside as a fanfic. Its an amazing story about an op player who is white which is awesome as you dont see alot of all around dominant white players when u talk greates its MJ labron kobe. But thier are now glaring plot wholes coming. one is instead of having to fight players hes having to fight refs who are allowing him to get hit with flagrant fouls. That would not happen NBA wouldnt allow it. if he got a carrer ending injury that would mean losses of millions if not billions of dollars in potential revenue. Not only that but it would also mean he can sue for hostile work invironment i mean the NBA is his employer and they are allowing him to possibly get injured. thier are smaller mistskes like NYU not having a D1 gymnastics team. his girl should have gone to cornell that does have a good school and D1 gymnastics. I havent heard him mention the players union or anything.

Great story, contains a motive and sub motive all the time. Writing skills need improvement but I can see it better over time, keep up the good work.

Have been following from the first book, definitely beautifully written without a doubt, the author put a lot of thought and effort into the novel. can't wait to see his sister

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I've read 20 chapters and in those chapters the MC remains a simp and he doesn't  even know how to use attribute points. Worst experience reading ?

Actuallya great writing .a beginner but much talented guys please support him with giving like he really deserves it.so  please give him stone and like

[Activating "Master of the Elementary"]

"Hindi! Babayaran ko na tubig ko." Inis kong sagot at pilit na kinuha ang slingbag ko sa tabi ko.

She wrapped her fingers around the iron bars and started channeling her energy into the rods.

Me:well what you want to do.

At the top right was probably the capitains quarters and treasure meanwhile the baracks of ordinary pirates was at ground level underneat the capitains quarters while there is a hack probably leading down to the cargo hoald on the floor a little off center from the center point of the ship