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I actually didn't have to burn any of my brain cells to read this novel.................................................................................

This story is very compelling and can pull you into the world and the characters backgrounds very easily. the characters themselves are very well written.

I don't know about other people but I had a bit of a hard time following at the beginning but I attribute that more to myself then your writing. Your description was vivid but dialog made me question weather an actual gamer would talk the way you wrote. Your style made it seem like they treated the game like the real world to much. Overall it was a decent read

I'm updating my review on this because the story is starting to get more interesting. one thing I really like about this story is that the cultivation is explained well. many cultivation novels do a terrible job of explaining the cultivation ranking system. not only does the author go into depth about how things work, but the addition of a system makes it really easy to understand. it seems like there's a lot of potential here and the action is picking up as well. I can't wait to see what happens once Young grows stronger.

C'est l'auteur ici, je donne 5 étoile a mon roman ( c'est normal non ?  ?? ). C'est mon premier roman donc vous trouver quelque faute au début, et merci de me signaler les erreurs et donner votre avis ca va beaucoup m'aider.

This lead many in the clan to be dissatisfied. But Shen's talent did not disappoint the Emperor his talents very rare. Once in a thousand. Many genius of the clan very left in the dust by him and this was done by him without any background no support. He trained himself to the peak he is standing right now.

He then lifted the forge up and then poured all the liquid out of the forge, he then suddenly released a massive amount of energy into a shape, it was a shape of a synth but it was very exquisite with fine and sharp details all along the blade. He poured the liquid into his energy and held it there, slowly shaping the liquid into it solidified.

"Why are they unavailable though? There's only 10 available for now, maybe you need to play first and by the time goes on you will unlocked them if you achieve something in the game? Well let's not mind that for now. Imma pick my classes, so there's warrior, archer, mage, berserker, thief, believer, pugilist and others it also shows their origins and what they excel at. Hmmm for now let's just pick a thief since it's probably an assassin and assassin is cool."Nathan pick thief and then a lot of customization like for his name character, His characters gender and face, well obviously he pick a girl as his gender in game, and then for his name.

  Mereka sudah memasuki perkarangan rumah. Tetapi Sehun tidak juga melepas tangan Yoona. Begitu juga ketika mereka masuk kedalam rumah. Ibunya, Siwon dan juga Shindong menatap mereka heran. Itu karena Sehun tidak menghiraukan sapaan mereka dan hanya melewati mereka begitu saja, tentu masih menggenggam tangan gadis itu. Sehun berhenti didepan kamar gadis itu. Seperti enggan, ia melepaskan tangan itu perlahan.

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

Max could not feel anything hostile from the bear, he could sense it was the bear way of doing thing, it would only speak when it felt it very important, Max didn't bother much about the bear's silence, he can always try and break the ice later, so he kept communicating with Zephrax, " what do we do next" Max asked " your training begins now, you have a long way to go if you don't want to be looking over your back" the Dragon replied " I know, I was hoping you would teach me some few things" what I know I can't teach you, our magic is different from yours, we are beast, we derive our source of power from a pure foundation, but, you humans are weak in the body so you can't derive power from a pure foundation, that is why you need to bond to us in other to do magic" " you should also know that it not impossible for your kind to derive power from the pure foundation, first you must acquire a strong body like a beast, then you must also develop your mind, then you must be bond to at least 3 beast of high quality, and they must be willing to do so." Max was silent as the Dragon continued " you, why I wanted you to bond naturally with Barok" Barok was the Dread Bear's name "all you need to do now is find a third beast as strong as both I and Barok, to bond with, then make ur body strong enough, but remember that there are other ways which your kind can derive power the pure foundation, but this way is the best without no backlash, because others have backlash doesn't make less effective as the one have choose for you, and always be mindful how you flex your strength, there are those in the shadows stronger than you and I, even those that have been living since the time of our ancestors till now, so tell me me are those fish easy fish you can trample on because you have me and Barok or a few years of training, when they have had hundreds if not thousands of years to train" Max couldn't believe what he was hearing, "you see that book the hold man left you with, start with that, learn and master all that is in it, it is not much compared to what you will need in defeating your enemies, but it is a good place to start learning" Max picked up the book, and start going through it, it was written in a language Max would not have been able to read before but somehow he could read it easily, Max believe it was because he had been bonded to a beast, he was surprised to see that he could only perform only few of the magic, he had been practising all day, it was until the sun began to set that, Max realize that he had not been to the work shop or eaten lunch, he put all the remaining items back in his bag and began to head back home.