I Will Eventually Return to the Great Sect - Reviews

Will be putting all my daily stones on this novel from now on. Come on Reds.Would have ignored this novel if MC transmigrated into lame clubs' managers like Manyoo or Liverpool.

Very fast paced story which takes the story from broke to millionaire in just 2 chapters. Completely illogical story development with some many plot holes that my mind aches just thinking about it.Overall, it's an interesting concept and had great potential - but as usual, author fails to deliver. Fast paced story, glaring plot holes, illogical characters who don't question anything around them, and the list goes on. I hope some other author can do what the Chinese does best and steal the core concept, while giving it the attention to detail it deserves. I genuinely find the thought experiment of "what if you could invade the dreams of other people" interesting - and I really hope that someone would thoroughly explore this in depth. Please hit me up if you do.

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It's quite an interesting story with a unique concept. Loved the power system and the nature of Elio. The world-building is also intriguing. Waiting for more chapters!

"There's nothing there Akira," Oneka-senpai said coldly as she walked passed me.

The nurse smiles nervously "We have met Mr. Dinesh. You ....had rejected our marriage proposal before a year".

"Not really," She answered as she pulled a nondescript white and red cellphone out of her purse. "I'm pretty sure I was tailed by a reporter for the first little while, but I know that I lost him after I entered a bar. Apparently he didn't want to look too hard into what a maid from the Aeries Villa was having after a long day of work. The girl I got the phone from was the first person I saw with a hat after I was sure the reporter was gone. She was young, probably only a year or two older than you, cutesy and very inebriated. Definitely not press or spy material."

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Ako nga pala si Marvie Almadin. Pumapasok sa puso't isip niya. De joke lang :D

Speed down the pace of your story a bit,  and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!

ML forces/imposes himself onto FML. When they’re married, he breaks his promise of never hurting her and only being good to her, then he treats another woman well. When both women were in danger during an avalanche on a snow mountain, he saves the other. Afterwards, he forces FML to forgive him by threatening his own life. His pitiful state is his fault and his behavior is cheap. Disgusting. Thankful I didn’t pay money to get to those parts. Next!