i shall win this game! - Reviews

Machine translation from chapter 777. A good novel, but it's impossible to read further. :(___________________________________________________________

So... What I'm getting from the synopsis is that the MC is a selfish, lazy f*** who let his family, who always treated him like a treasure despite his slovenly ways, fight to the brink of destruction, before reluctantly stepping up to save them. Doesn't sound like a MC I'd enjoy reading about.

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Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.

I thought it must be a isekai shit but no it's more than that. I really loved the narration style it's not your classic old school baritone but the urban touch is cool. I am really looking forward on reading the story. however I think the quality of literature can be a bit better.

The town is panicking of what is happening as I too! It's really interesting what will Sage does. It's like I'm reading hunters of prey. over all, it's a very good story so keep it up!

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This was an enjoyable read!Some of the scenes hold solid humour, and the story seems to be developing rather quickly. The relationship between the two main characters and their home life was established quickly, which made their reactions to their circumstances further on realistic to the matter at hand. The writing could use some work. Oftentimes, it swaps from present to past tense, especially in descriptions and dialogue tags. This can be read over though, and the writing is easy to read. I like how quick the story is developing, and the system seems interesting as well. This book looks open to opportunity!

Should change the name of this book to: "I locked the chapters early so people won't read it, so nyah nyah nyah!"

Nggak ada versi indonya kak?????????????

As soon as our eyes met, my heart turned cold.