I Just Want to Divorce - Reviews

So this is just a wuick review for more chapters basically, but I'll just add my opinion and suggestions. So base on the chapters that I have read(until ch. 46), it is going pretty good.Pros1. Great grammar - I can barely spot any mistakes in grammar until ch. 462. Realistic Characters - So the characters in this story has a certain depth to them and has some background of their own, in other words they're not like Passerby 1, 2, 3 or A, B, C3. Good Writting Style - From what I have read, the author's writting is comparable to professional writtersa and is very to understand.4. Simple but Clear Worldbuilding - The world building is decent, but still has flaws(ex. The other source of entertainment like games, sports, and etc. should be more advanced as the entertainment is industry is backwards right? So I think it should not be exactly the same). Overall it's ****** and easy to understand as it is just a bit in the future and the situation is the same except for the entertainment industry.Cons1. The MC's First Life is Just Blank - Until ch. 46 I only noticed a few hints of details regarding his first life and although I think that is not really extremely important to the story, but it helps us to understand the MC and why he became like that. 2. The MC's Personality Might Annoy Some People - From an incident in the hotel manager underestimating him and he fights back by humiliating the manager(the standard plot). In this event he may seem annoying to people as some people see him as too petty(personally I think what he did isn't right, however it is the manager's fault for stepping on his dignity first and probably did it many times as well). Inially the MC just wated to treat his friends to a meal.3. Some Character's Personality Might Seriously Annoy You - So some characters in this story, especially a CERTAIN FAMILY AND A CERTAIN SINGER'S personality would seriosly make you mad like I was UGHHHHHHH!!!=&=¥×#*@£. I was soooo fkin FRUSTRATED.Suggestions: - Tone down the annoyingness of some characters.- Don't put too much THOTS in the story.- No Harem PLEASE!- Try to stay orignal and don't stick too much on cliches.-MOAR CHAPTERS.- Don't be discouraged and stay awesome.P.S. If you actually read that then thanks and congratualtions I guess...

I enjoy this story a lot, I get an Assassination Classroom vibe a bit, but you can tell its completely different. Like I hope maybe one day you decide to make a manga this so good, and I am sure it would be popular amongst the anime world if you made a manga out of it. Keep up the amazing work Author~ can't wait to read more chapters!

first time i see something so bad in my life, all this story doenst seem to have any sense the didnt give anything out he is so plain sadly...........

The author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all. The story title is quite hooking. Keep on writing and I think you will improve quite fast as your story has the potential and a really good plot. Great job author!!!

Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??

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lin quiang was shocked... 'what would happen if master wei found that his son is injured...its all his mistake... he should take care of his young master '

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By the time I reach Niko's house and, before stepping out of my car I grab my anti-depressants. I notice someone else is also just arriving. I probably look questionable to whomever this is. Regardless, the mystery person gets out of their car and asks, "John?" I instantly detect his voice as William. My long-time friend since college. I ask, "Hello William. It's so nice to see you again. How are you, how's life treating you?" We chit chat for a short bit before someone else arrives in a black car behind William. The man exits the car with false confidence and walks up to both me and William. He introduces himself as Issac. Before long, we're all inside listening to what Niko is saying about tonight. He doesn't look well. He has massive dark circles under his eyes. Before long, we're all playing poker and taking shots. I black out before I could question anything.

Lu Xinyi blushed and looked away. She really didn't understand why Shen Yi was so straightforward towards her.

"okay!"he relied with full energy

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?