I Don’t Know The Original Work - Reviews

Go forth and speak softly, but carry a big stick.                                                                            Overall good read

The plot is terribly simplistic. The MC wants something, he gets it. If the MC needs money to pay for his land, he'll get it the next day. If he finds a girl attractive, she falls in love with him when he says "hello" just like that.As far as I can tell, there's no explanation of where the system came from. It just appears. Is it because he dove in the river trying to save someone? Or maybe because he tried cultivating land for 3 years? No clue. Also, despite it's name of "Pharmacist system" it's just to help grow plants so far, some of which have medicinal properties, but mostly just taste good.The translation/editing also needs work. Especially, as so many others have already said, the system dialogue that is not differentiated in any way. Bolding or italicizing it would solve this easily. As it stands it's really annoying.

I am really looking forward. Story is saddening but appealing.  Especially Daniel what a wonderful person he is shown to be. I hope he gets happiness,he is really heartbroken.?

Now I have only read the first segment of the book so I have not seen how your skills have progressed but for the whole werewolf thing (like descriptions or actions like instead of ‘furry hand in his chest’ something like ‘clawed fist thrusted through his chest’ ect) i would suggest you used more violent, beast like description and maybe look at some books of the genre.I would suggest looking at the book on this site beast: reborn and although your books may lack the same themes (like how in that book werewolves are more ‘beast than man’ and yours seem to be more human) it is a godo source of inspiration and werewolf-y, I would also suggest looking at the latter chapters since once apon a time that author was also unskilled.And finally thank you for all of your hard work and I might have said too much (if you haven’t guessed) i’m very passionate when it comes to wolves (especially books about werewolves).

This Novel definitly contains lots of fluff. I don't even know how the story can progress with this level of fluffyness, but somehow it does. At the beginning the text quality was certainly lacking, but it got better over time. I will continue reading this.

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A Great slow paced Cultivation novel. Similar to RMJI in that sense and his treasure dose not make him op as of yet.Id say its a nice hidden gem out there.

Ten chapters in and I‘m already hooked.As expected of the author of rebirth of the strongest guild master, this is already a masterpiece.I hope he continues to write this. I’m really looking forward for future chapters.

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nice story and interesting characters and world background

In fact, even awakening as an Origin Elf was difficult because instead of one Bloodline they had to awaken two! Not only that, they had to merge them as well!

A few months ago, the Primis was tasked by the old man that was sitting on the lonely pedestal in front of him to kill that Son of the Origin, and he failed twice already. Thus the old man was angry. The senior clothed in a poor man's linen looked very weak and frail, but the Primis knew he should never disrespect the man, as deep within those thin fingers that looked like a dying branch was a powerful force that could take everything that he held dear. Also, disrespecting the man is an extreme taboo, as the man himself was the great father of the Primis. He was the last of the many, the one who still lives to tell the tale and do what needs to be done, for the victory of the fallen and the defeat of the Supreme.