I Cast, Gun Magic - Reviews

Hey, it's a good story. And it's going pretty well. I just hope that you will continue with the updates. And that's all. And I want to say I enjoyed this first 16 chapters. Just I think the main character can be kinda pretty idiotic sometimes but I guess it's the part of the character.

Definitely a good book heading places!! Love the book, love where it's going, although the cover is a bit misleading (because its a girl) but that's no problem, considering that it still captivates the reader, no matter what they thought they were walking in to.

100th comment, congrats author..........

its realy good although it has a little cliche in the first chapters but story line and world background is one of the best its realy a very unique novel good job author keep going  (if you have time you can rewrite first chapters any way its a nice work thanks)

I'm going to need more people to vote on this story faster, so this can finally publish. Because just like any of y'all, I am EXTREMELY desperate for this novel to appear in my library with a tap on my screen. So, again, VOTE FOR IT FOR CRYING OUT LOOOUD ?? !!

Tsk lalo akong nawalan ng gana.

So yeah. Make sure to check out the new novel I'm going to write. It's called "Gray Goo Finds Life in Another World," though I might change the name in the future.

Rogue's heart fell to his stomach. His muscles froze, and his brain buzzed - eyes transfixed on the scene unfolding before him and unable to venture elsewhere. The titan discharged a horrified wail as he hurriedly placed his little one upon his shoulder and commanded himself to run. His human! Grisha was dead! He could not lose Carla! He would not let that happen! He just couldn't!

- Where there's a time skip and Annabeth's journey as a full-fledged stalker continues-

Even though all of this is going on, Def couldn't understand a single thing that was said. He found the language to be foreign and unfamiliar, to be expected of a new world. A head ache inducing problem he now has to face.

-Hall of Origins-

Luckily, he could normally walk as usual. Running and jumping were also not a problem. Although the speed didn't seem to be faster than when he was still alive, at least he didn't need to worry about being trapped in the endless ocean and being a lonely ghost, which was tied to his spirit for his entire life.