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Alright I might say these characters are some of the worst I have ever read. For a moment, I almost thought I am a freaking Oracle cuz their actions are so gOdDam predictable. Additionally, the "mightiest" little pleasant sounds kind of cringy not gonna lie.

I just read through all of the chapters available for this novel, up to 247, and I must say that I have been thoroughly enjoying this novel.I didn't have a lot of expectations going in but the quality of the work and the depth that each character and situation had to them truly kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time, making me want to keep reading.It is a very complex story with a lot of elements that I know some people might not particularly enjoy or may be off putting to them, but getting past the hiccups in the beginning and understanding a bit more about the situation that isn't very apparent on the surface level has been a truly rewarding experience, and I recommend you if you have just wandered by this to give the novel a chance.Some parts of the story I didn't particularly care for (for example, *perhaps a bit spoiler, just scroll all the way down. I didn't mark the review as spoiler because the larger portion of this review doesn't have any, and this is just for providing some criticism for the Author*............The introduction of the third world didn't really hook me in to much, and I ended up skipping to the end of the larger arc that happened because I wasn't as invested into it like I was with his original world and the second world he found himself in. It seemed particularly random at first, and the events didn't seem to have much of an important place in the story [though, I may just be ignorant as I hadn't read through it too much. I will say, I've been able to keep up with the story for the most part without getting any context from this part of the story]. Author, one criticism I'd have when you go about this again is to try and give a more solid connection to the new world and the character and his reasons for going there to create more investment for the reader. It seemed forced and out of place the way that it happened.).*END of spoilers*..............Truly a hidden gem, it's a shame that it is so underrated as I am writing this review, and I can only offer words of praise to the author for giving so much effort into your novel here. Please keep going, I'm excited to see what happens next with the story.

I like the characters names, it has a nice flow between the chapters . All in all it is something new that i personally have enjoyed reading so far.

Okay. This is my honest review. This novel is... decent. There are very, very few grammar mistakes if you don't count the other constantly forgetting to end a paragraph with a period as a grammar mistake. and the stability of the uploads is very good, though do understand my criteria isn't frequent updates, but being sure that the author will give me a chapter at a designated time every time. and for this guy, it's once a week, not bad, but definitely not good. as for the story development, it's not bad. I've read 103 chapters, and the story is pretty average. character design is also not that bad. the frequently appearing characters aren't 2d, but they're also not 3d. kind of 2.5 d, if that makes any sense. the side characters tho, are 2d, which is a problem. as for world-building, it's going pretty slow. and there isn't any sign of that changing. it's good in the way that there aren't any info-dumps. bad in the way that the world-building is unsatisfying. I can tell you what you can expect and not expect. (Might contain small, but relatively easy to guess spoilers)1- the MC becoming strong very quickly.2- the MC has a very OP bloodline and father3- the MC keeps shocking everyone because he grows monstrously fast.4- The story/novel itself is extremely idealistic. nobody is evil, nobody does any bullying, nobody is anything but friendly, which is extremely weird.and that's it, really. Oh, also harem, definitely a plus.If you have nothing to do, do give it a try. although I might seem like I'm roasting it, but it's definitely not bad, as far as my reading experience goes, there are much worse ones out there

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