I Became The Son Of The Demon Queen - Reviews

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The only interesting aspect of the story is the data ability. Everything else is secondary including the main character. Despite saying he will do his best to keep this acquired talent a secret, he shamelessly performs unbelievably well. He went from a student with low grades to a genius in just a day to be generous few days. He even solved a hard maths question nobody could solve. And just before all these events he survived a truck accident. The guy is just stupid, this ability has been given to a brain dead mc.  Such a shame.

Get a  editer it seems like it was run through Google translate. The words are rather jumbled and attempt at simile and metaphors are tricky to decipher. Gender words should be considered as reference to a species. Also the word larva was mistaken as ladies.

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This story is so high quality, I feel a little awkward reading it here for free. This can easily be sold as a book. It shows a xianxia world where strength is everything and cultivators treat normal people like dirt. It's quite gritty and dark at times, specially at the beggining, but after +100 chapter I think it's more apt to call it 'realistic'. The story and its characters were built with care and a lot of work, and it shows. All in all, highly recommended to any who can stomach it.

Great story.The story is about Ashton a 18 year old child and nine year old Matt a adult. Both of them lived a pretty normal life of orphans but one day everything chages just cause X wanted it to. And the inhuman game of destruction begins. Writing quality - Great, no grammar errorsStory development - Doesn't let you down, I will rather say it was fast pace no time was wasted on dally-daling.Character design - On point, especially with Matt despite acting like adult we can clearly see his innocent side while being carefree Ashton shows the will to protect it.World background - It gives the me Maze Runner vibes (I don't know I might be wrong about it. only author can tell property)Should you read this novel? Of course, I will recommend it. Matt and Ashton's chemistry is on point. Though I am looking forward to Ashton's partner since I can't see Matt as someone to ship with anyone at this moment. May be my fujoshi self just need a time skip until Matt is older?

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Amazing story, that's all I can say. it flows well, it's funny from time to time, and also it's light to read. there's no system here, so a plus point to this book.

Spoiler Review after reading 400 Chapters of this novel. So let's get this out of the way, I like this novel. When I first read this novel I wasn't exactly sure how I felt about it. Usually novels with the title "System" are a hit or miss for me but I liked the concept of what the synopsis gave me so I ended up giving it a try and I'm happy to admit that this novel is kind of a gem on here. Be honest here. The novels on Webnovel are usually from people who are first time readers, somewhat experienced writers and the rare good veterans who know what their doing now. This novel is in the middle. The Writing Quality is a 4/5, the only reason I didn't max it is because the author keeps getting his He/She mixed up. Honestly with how well the author writes it wouldn't surprise me if I'm getting trolled or not. Story Development is Great. I'll be honest here and say I don't like the Female lead Anna. From her standpoint she reminds me of those insufferable cocky overpowered Korean protagonists. I mentioned Korean Protagonists because the 75% of the time they have a reincarnated person they usually have those traits. Noel on the other hand is the real jewel. I'll just leave it at that. I give Character Design a 3 because honestly there's nothing that stands out to me to remember these characters besides one has a System and the other is a Regressor. All in all I'd recommend this book. Yes the novel is kind of a bumpy ride at the beginning but I'm happy that it smoothens out and keeps going upward. I don't regret trying this novel and if it ever got published to a real book I'd definitely buy it. (Of course I hope they'd fix the he/she problem though.)

A little bit of yuri is fine, but holy heck is this excessive. MC is basically a 3rd wheel in this story and not really about him at all. Always feels like the girls completely just forget about him and he gets almost no character development. His entire 19 years of life on earth was thrown out the window wayyyy to easily. Sure I get he can grow out of it but in like 3 months?!? This story would be 1000% better if you only just turned the yuri down and it’s not always behind the MCs back (which does feel like he’s almost getting cheated on).