I am an Eldritch Entity - Reviews

I'm so much in love with this. Good job, Author.

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The MC is supposed to have lived for billions of years,had his adoptive family murdered and struggled to get powerful enough until he reached a very high cultivation level yet he never shows any of that experience he gained in life, he's like a blank slate.Honestly disappointing, furthermore as all the characters are shallow,they don't seem to have any real qualities.The plot is predictable enough at times that you'll know what's going to happen 30 chapters before.At one point MC wanted to live a peaceful life after thinking his Clan was killed and there could have been a small Arc where we could see his character development but the author decides to use a 3-5 chapters SYSTEM to force him to advance the plot.The author argued that people criticized the novel because they want to see another TDG or Coiling Dragon instead of thinking what he had written wrong and can't understand that those 2 implemented their ideas right while he didn't.Written after 135 chapters

Not your average cultivation + weapons forging novel. The protagonist starts off old, but uses his Holy Flame to forge himself a new body. As his forging and tempering progresses, he actually gets younger and stronger. Since the protagonist is an older male, there isn't any romance (as of yet). Just straightforward smithing, monster hunting, and manly determination.

This is good so far                                                                                                                           

Very much enjoyed it! The way of writing, character interactions, and especially some dialogue really made the feeling of being in the story with the characters so real that it just fuels the imagination! Amazing work!

As those words left my lips they finally made their move. I can easily hear the growing ruckus outside, and that's also when they came in.

"My Lady..."

"Finally," The mage groaned, finishing her fifth glass of mead. "I was actually starting to feel my alcohol."

How dare she is telling me false thing? I said myself. But I love the way she expresses.

"I think I will leave the place for now" Kushina giggled and stood up from the bed "I think it's time you enjoy that cock worship girl yourself sochi-kun." she patted his head softly before leaving the room "Have fun!" and closed the door behind her.

Through the windows of a family house, they saw a woman standing and eating something covered in a piece of cloth. Blood dripped from it and an infant's hand was left hanging. There was no doubt that a mother was eating her child who could not even resist.