I haven't written many reviews on this site so maybe my words aren't very credible, however i must say that this story is bad, perhaps the idea of the story itself is good, but the way the author writes is simply subpar at best, it reminds me of an essay one could read from a second grader. if it could be rewritten by someone else then perhaps I could give this a much higher rating but 2/5 is already the highest I can give this.