HERO//FALL - Reviews

I understand the author didn't like working on this story, but i prefer this one over white online 100%. Never got bored reading this, even though there were some grammar issues.

I have read about 400 chapters. The story starts off pretty well. The cultivation path is quite interesting. But the MC is a doormat in front of girls. There is the little sister who is not actually his sister since he is blood adopted. She is a real piece of work. Very overpossessive of her brother and take recordings of what he says in a quite innocent manner and twists it so that it seems he said something perverted. She is always blackmailing him about how she is gonna tell everyone about how he wants to sleep with her. Which of course he doesn't(atleast until where I have read) all the while being the only one who wants to be together with him. If the MC thinks like that we can atleast say that it is because she is not his real sister sister since he is a transmigrator. But she has no excuse. Their parents only revealed that the MC was adopted by them on his 18th birthday,that is,when the story begins.Quite possibly one of the most annoying and unlikeable character. On the other hand her friend Alice is pretty good.A somewhat cliche character but till now only she seems normal morally. Also there is an overabundance of super powerful female characters who has  a somewhat ambiguous relationship with the MC which makes me think this is going to be a harem. I can't be sure. Another problem I have is while the female  characters start off quite strong, the story seems to be inching towards making them dependent on the MC. Yes they do get a lot of power from their own  inheritances and hard work, but their power shows a drastic increase after they absorb the energy orbs provided by the MC. Yet another problem is the rest of the characters. While there exist a lot of powerful male characters, they remain in the background. Till now we are acquainted with a couple of strong male characters but they are only shown once in a while. The other mob characters exist only to admire the MC and be envious of him. The only good thing here is that there is no stupid cannon fodders who intentionally fights with the MC and get thrashed. They are often too afraid of his power and cultivation speed. The faceslapping and fighting is reserved for the alien races.

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it's the very best novel from webnoveljust so sad that it never bean pick uphope that some day someonei really wish and hope that it will be translated  :)

All around maybe the best ero type novel I've ever read. My only problem with it is that there aren't enough chapters, so as one of the other reveiws so eloquently repeated, don't drop.

A rare gem on this site. It reminds me a bit of Terror Infinity and that is a rare feeling to have these days. Anyone who enjoys the horror or survival genre should come on down and give it a chance to read!

I think this novel was on gravity tales and had more than a hundred or two hundred chapters already. Anyway, this novel has all the cliches I find annoying in Chinese novels.The novel has a mc who becomes a *** crazed maniac in less than 100 chapters, he has Captain America level of powers in normal earth, kills people for whatever reason(Some delinquents were harassing a harem member. He wanted to teach them a lesson and ended up breaking someone's bone. He felt like it would cause trouble to him so he just killed them all instead. The guys didn't want to kill him or anything, they were just perverts verbally harassing a girl...)This story is pointlessly nationalistic(Author mentions China superiority in places nobody really cares) and author doesn't know about foreign countries that much, so every foreigner is a stereotype. All mexicans are drug gangs here, American girls are really "open

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The story seems interesting enough from what I've read, however the author clearly needs an editor and someone who can help him with overall sentence structure. This clearly isn't the authors first language however there is potential in the novel, he just needs someone to brush up the errors he's made, as long as someone can help him with editing then I see potential for the novel.

As the words registered, I realized she might be right. I shook my head though, "I swore I would get you home. I never break my promises." I took off after the Harpy again to help Ryan, once that thing was dead we could help Father. I pulled out my shield, and ran for him.

Maybe put a few things of "history strongest disciple" like saikuken or something like that. Thank you for the chapter. ^^

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