Hell Hillel - Reviews

Don't get me wrong, I loved this story, however, after so many chapters I feel nothing but disappointment and like I wasted my time.The premise was good, it had everything going for it and although the development was slow, it was interesting and honestly kind of addicting to read. However, it just went downhill for me. MC is supposed to have a system which he just tossed aside for some idiotic reason his already unbearably slow progression almost comes to a complete halt for at least 2k chapters. This novel had promise, it had soul, it was good. I don't know what the author was thinking but he honestly murdered the story through the introduction of certain characters, the lack of focus on the MC at times and simply, the unbearably slow progression of the MC. I honestly feel like a snail can go around the world faster than the MC can progress. Oh and don't even get me started on how the MC lets the worst option of an FL walk all over him. God this is infuriating. honestly, just read the first couple hundred chapters, that's about as good as it's gonna get, or don't, use your time for something productive

I really enjoy the way the story is written, I smiled readfinh about the little sister... Characters have been beautifully described.  Highly recommend!  Not a book you want to pass up?

The yaoi vibes clash with the tags that are claiming an R-18 Harem. The protag is dumb and the plot is ridiculous. Filled with unnatural cliche moments that immediately break you out of the story.At one point some random rich dude that has his figure explained in detail is flirting with the protag in a cab after he stole it. Now that does nothing for me as a straight man secure in my sexuality, I don't care if a character is that way, but at the same time, I'm looking at the tags confused about how I got to this point. Know what I mean? The author said it was supposed to be funny. This was just one of the events like that.Then there are the over-the-top cliches. The phone thing was where I dropped it. I'm not gonna bother going into them though. Just don't waste your time if you're bothered by any of this. Do not go in expecting the plot to move towards what the tags claim anytime soon. It's very boring even if you ignore what I've pointed out.

At https://***.novelupdates.com/series/descent-of-the-god-of-magic/ 55 chapters have already been translated.You can read the basics of the story there.

Wasn't this the same premise as the other scarecrow book last week?Definitely not complaining though, always down for more protagonists being monsters

Top tier novel!Can't wait to read more of Michael's story. It's a really good and exciting start.Will keep coming back to give a more detailed review.

I swear, I've read this before.  Probably under another name - I'm getting no results under this title with a google search. But I'm getting real deja vu feeling after getting to chpt 25+.   Maybe its just the formulaic nature of these novels?

This is really good! Their loyalty to each other is really amazing yet still heart breaking. I got this recommendation from other fics, tumblr and Twitter.

The overall flow and direction of the story isn't bad, with a little light hearted commentary spicing things up makes it a decent read. Unfortunately the Author has it he'll bent on repeating certain things such as how handsome masculine, or how great the Mc is with women. You will not have more then two chapters before this nonsense starts up again. Alas even all the characters we've been introduced to are female and basically throw themselves at the Mc. I personally do not like harems so this novel isn't for me.

She was not in solitary confinement but she might as well have been, because no one dared to take a step near her.

The fact that you can be strict with her in her training, no matter how much you care for her. The question is, will you be able to punish her?

"I am asking for the other 'tool', as you so like to call, that you used on Stephanie." He responds while stepping back.