Heart's Leap - Reviews

anything but Damien to be back in Sierra life is absolutely a big No the way he enjoyed sleeping with casie and stopped searching for Sierra and insulted her when she worked as a waitress she deserves better not even for the sake of her children

The story plot is very interesting, it's a great system story to read. The beginning gets one so hooked and you just keep reading, highly recommended.

Nice work of art @mysterious_pen  But why ain't you updating and please what happened to the one on light reader. It been long since you updated it

Great, regular update will make it better

Valla mierda el MC si sabes que no vas a ganar no vallas y déjalo a tu amigo y no hagas el ridiculizado o al menos gana una hdp aquí lo dejo solo por eso

I just finish d this up to chapter 11 and I was about to give up but then the main character finically started to get her head and butt together. The story is starting to shape up nicely.

This was a new read for me, this was an extraordinary and wonderful novel. The vocabulary and writing proficiency was supremely promising from the author. keep it up!

I'll give 5 stars as keep up the good work, but seriously give me a chapter flush or something i can't really tell how good this is actually

Make it best and get past 800 chapter with 4.5 review and i will be your top supporter and gift you as many as bonus chapter demand but it's should be likable from otaku

The grammar is very bad. The story is OK though.

This novel has some weird inconsistencies in it. These could be fixed if the author tries to flesh out the story information more and put more thought in their world building and word choice. The story has a relatively fast pace and this seems to be caused by the lack of thought the protagonist has. The protagonist doesn’t seem to observe the world he is in well and this is confirmed by the lack of his use or the author’s lack of including the protagonist’s use of his “Apraisal Skill”. Furthermore, a good amount of the novel takes place in the protagonist’s head (his thoughts) rather than descriptions of the world of the novel.I personally like the concept the novel is based upon but the rest of the novel is subpar so far. (I’m around 20 chapters in.)

It’s a slow climb from the bottom but the pay off will feel all the more earned. The characters and world go hard. Churches and heavenly holy women. Good stuffs. If you’re into charcaters who are willing to grind their way to the top, this for you.