Heartbeat Document - Reviews

Not sure how a person who suddenly find himself in a new world quickly immerse himself into killing and fighting others. Other good novels will follow pattern of the protagonist getting a clear idea of his surrounding before going wild. Murdering someone shouldn't be so easy especially when it's the first time killing someone. Convoluted plot jumping from declaring a life and death duel with half brother to cultivation breakthrough, from running into a dangerous area with no experience to killing someone with no enmity.

I lik3 it so far I'm willing to keep reading  if it comes out trial reads. told my bro about he says it sounds cool so he may read it as well.

It's Good.You're not gonna drop this right?Like every other novel you wrote...........................................I dunno how to write reviews

Pls dont drop the novel :)......................................................................and more update :).......................................

what great disappointment this is?1- this is a fanfiction of perfect world2- an mc who always complain and nag to system3- mc is stupid, is ignorance to surroundings and his own action4- bad translation and character building5- everything

I didn't like it because I read this type of novel too many time...but it's good. If you haven't read this type novel then give it a try.  

looked interesting and fresh for a few chapters. but i guess a bunch of idiots spamming comments about how it didn't fit the usual troupes and them believing that is how the world should work forced the author to change the novel into a generic cultivation one.

??????????????????????????????????????trying my best that I can read this so soon??????????????????

"Wifey."

"Crack!" Splinters flew as the little outrigger got destroyed by a rock as big as Alfy's head.

Winston was not as shocked as he could have been. His emotions were still slightly numb so he did what any person would do, and he clicked the option to turn into a slime, next thing he knew, he was a 10cm blob of blue slime. His both was kind of transparent, giving it a strange, but kind of cute look.

"Hoy hindi ah!" mabilis niyang kontra sa sinabi ko. "Gusto kita isama kasi gusto ko talaga!" halata ang pangungumbinsi sa boses niya.