Hallow Throne - Reviews

good read for fantasy readers lots of action to keep things interesting

Filler to plot ratio too low not worth the stones to read bull **** Also story was pretty good, tho at less than 20% completion it’s already premium, and not worth ss given most chapter / contents are fillers

I've read quite a lot of original novel either on Webnovel or royalroadl, and this one really got good prospect.Without much spoiler we can see there is a feeble and quite stupid MC at first with a mentality that in quite sure a lot of readers won't like, but because of his meeting with that legend and the adventures that follow, the MC experience a growth in a lot of lacking area and become in the end a MC that I'm sure every reader like to follow. I've read till the latest chapter (111 at review time) and I'm quite surprised at how well done the characters design is, it is extremely rare in original novels to see a flawless design like that ?.My only regret is that the world background is too complex to understand right now, I guess the more the story unveil the more we will understand about it, but for the details given until now, I must say I'm totally lost ?. But it doesn't matter as all the good points totally outweigh this one.Anyway, author really talented ? I sincerely hope to see more from him ?.

From what I read it is quite interesting if you like food related stories. But it isn't really what I would read. But that is just my opinion.

Love the premise, hate the execution. The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together. There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip.I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.

Author here, to give myself a free five star review, but also to say thank you all for reading my novel. I promise I’ll update tbe novel soon.

Hi there! Just here to give you some reviews :) Hope you don't take my review negatively if ever it creates an impact on you.To be honest, I like how you go through with your narration, its like written by an experienced writer (are you?). There are some minor issues with your grammar like in your first chapter,'A shrill insane voice screams from quite a distance away, but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him. 'the part ' A shrill insane voice screams...' you could just modify it a bit like, 'Insane-like shrills and screams..' to me it sounds really disturbing because you are putting too much adjectives just to describe, keeping it ****** and short is needed sometimes.'but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him.' ill try to edit this part because I cannot explain on what to do on this part.'but the voice that emitted a horrifying effect doesn't affect a hundred (or so) poorly-dressed figures surrounding him.'This is the only thing I could give as an example..I hope you wont take this as an offensive review :)P.S I love the idea you put in your story...

Tyler(2?): "Didn't your blood get absorbed by the one star shard? Why not try to smear some more blood onto them? It's worth a shot don't you think?"

Today she will go to the studio in the company to shoot for the company's anniversary. Elina has kept her schedule light for a few days then her heavy workload will start from next month. Since it has been some time she went to the company many people came to greet her. Last time she just went to the CEO's office so this time she also greeted her past aquintances with enthusiasm.

"I-I left them to find you, the whole week you were gone was the worst day of my life since my whole clan vanished, I just want to-"

He had changed a lot from his previous life. That pseudo creator state had strengthed his soul and mind to a high degree. He may not have that power anymore, but that knowledge and the memories of creator were present. His soul had gained the ability to create, transform, destroy and absorb. He could absorb any energy, then store or transform it into different forms. He suspected this was also the source for his magical power in this body.  He also did not need to eat or breathe due to this and could sustain himself on absorption only. He could use his magical abilities without a wand, he could control his age, body features, and size. He knew of his regeneration as his eyes had regrown and wounds during training had healed at a visible rate. Though he had little luck with creating and destroying. He knew he had these abilities but was not able to trigger them.

"Haeji.. You don't have to do that. I'm fine. Really. It was just one pepper chili anyways. I can handle it. So, can you please come down? I don't really like making a big scene out of it."