Great primordial sin - Reviews

runaway alpha the story is good and interesting

Su Yang!? Who invited that god here!?!?...........…….......................................................................................

This is a pretty awesome story to be honest there is not a lot to it yet but it is growing pretty good and leaves me hungry for more. Author keep it up and I’m definitely a fan from now on

Ok, the novel is slightly interesting. And, yes, it resembles superficially to I have a mansion in the post apocalyptic world, but just inbthe premise of the MC going from and back to gis own world. This ia whole genre, and this novel is more into the development of the MC than the power-harem fantasy. If the novel gets picked for voting I will vote for it... except if it is picked besides Plague Doctor: All my votes are for Plague Doctor.

it reminds me of the same story line in another book on a website, It's frustrating to see the same thing twice. what a copy cat. write your own story author it is not worth writing if you copy the story.

bruh the sypnopsis is just plain cringe and the fact that he returns from a 5 year hiatus is just dumb. i understand that its a long time but why 5 years why not more. frustrates me that authors always use 5 or less years, n the fact that its prob garbage from sypnopsis alone.

Amo rolled his eyes.

*ding!*

Resonate,Knowledge, Form, Utterance, Shape, Make Up,Energy, Compounds, Law, Sequence these words multiplied tinted red in his visage forming but melted together not distinguishable but there, more words filled his vision but they were not readable, his racked brain now rocked with the pain he grabbed his mind in pain cusping it in both hands

Feng Li was a little astonished , "huh ?"

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

" Kita akan bertarung setelah 3 hari. Aku akan menghajarmu " kata Riaser arogan yang aku hanya malah melihatnya