Grapefruit - Reviews

Another great book for the Queen Among series. I love that you really get to know the characters and the twists and turns they gp through. can't wait for more.

I love this book. the translation is very good. I hope this book will get picked because I cant find any decent translations online. ???????????

I LOVE IT, as soon as i started reading it I was engrossed into It, I can’t wait for a new chapter to come out, Keep going and good luck! :)

Nice theme, interesting Mc, refreshin change from the typical fantasy vrmmo . Excited to see this play out!!……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel.  Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving onWhats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh

I don't know what to say but keep up the good work everything is great writing is very good and easy to understand the characters are beautiful written this is the thing I wanna read

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the  engagement of your book

Reaching my hand up to the ledge, I pulled myself up and over, rolling onto my back I stared blankly at the clouds rolling by. A sense of achievement was flowing throughput my whole body, feeling quite similar to being full of adrenaline.

"Here, I'll speak slowly so you'll understand," The voice said. "I need a favor." That's it!? A favor?! Maybe Joseph's subconscious has taken the dream over.

It's early Dawn in the Red Stone Valley in the forest of the Wisps. Jasmine is sitting behind a bush, she can see her breath as it rises in the cool mist of the Forest morning. Fog covered the floor of the forest like a wispy white blanket, the sun just rising over the mountain range It shines streaks of light through the trees, as if to greet her with a warm smile. She flexes her hands to warm them up, then silently pulls an arrow from the quiver beside her. After doing so she knocks the arrow to her bow. Bow and arrow in hand she heads up the slope ahead of her. She walks in silence, her foot steps barely audiable. As she progressed up the slope she could see the clearing neer the gate blue lake, she made a mental note to stay down wind from the lake as to not scare away her pray. It was a warm spring morning Jasmine could not dream of a better place to be then her home. As the sun broke past the treeline of the valley a warm golden light flooded the field. Jasmine could smell the fresh blooming spring flower wake from thare winter sleep. Admiring the beauty of her home almost made her forget that she was on a mission. To find brakefast, so she took a deep breath to refocus her self and continued moving. She noticed a medium sized bolder neer the edge of the forest line so we decided that's whare sh would wait. She did not have to wait long for not a moment after she reached the rock a doe had emuged from the forest. getting low to crouch to the ground so she can get a few feet closer. Bow in hand she draws back the arrow and aims at the doe. But to her dismay her bow creaked under the strain, she pulled it back to fast. The does ears perked up in alert, "well it's now or never I guess" she thinks to her self. As she stands up to take the shot, she breaths in and out once more and let's lose her arrow.

"Yes! I met all the other Heir and I never heard of a Heir Phantomhive." I said.

I have enjoyed the soft, *punipuni* (squishy) sensation of being held between her thighs, but if I lose my focus, my 7th ejaculation would begin immediately.