At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is.The main character, Devon, seems to have enough character to make him feel alive and make one look forward to his development.The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything.Looking forward to the next chapters!