Hello :D. this is a fun read but I have to point out the bad to talk about the good part.It’s entertaining, but it struggles to find its footing beyond its initial hook. The premise is undeniably intriguing. It’s a clever subversion of traditional fantasy tropes, and the first few chapters establish the stakes well. However, the execution quickly falls into predictable patterns. The protagonist, while amusing, lacks the complexity needed to carry the story. His motivations often feel surface-level. The supporting cast fares even worse, with most of them reduced to one-dimensional archetypes. It quickly falls into the trap of being a one-note character. (I think that in later chapters you may or may not improve on this since I had only read the first 20 chapters .)It have potential for World-Building and it still holds entertainment value for readers who enjoy fast-paced, easy-to-digest fantasy stories. Worth the shot to read and it was fun one.A literature nerds (example me lol) can feel this novel lacking in places but it in the end it's still your work of passion and I repect that. So continue writing with all of your might :D .
