from zero: the dark descent - Reviews

Third time is indeed the charm. To all those who waited for 4 months with me without losing hope, I toast to you.(MHoH translator has told they'll be doing this next :) )

stay away from this novel, for your own good.

Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments

After reading the rawThe novel is okjust turn ur brain offhad the LoHP vibe (plot always saved him)A bit on nationalism **spoilerMC learned English and people(american) try to talk to him but he was like they should talk to him in Chinese (even though they don’t know how to speak It)Had money and now he can cheat on his lovers without letting them know first guess what ?? plot saved him again and let the lovers think that they aren’t good enough for himWell it a wish fulfillment What did I expect ??

For those that enjoy novels with system then this novel jumps right into the action. The pacing is good and the world building shows that the writer put a lot of thought and effort into it. The updates are stable and I look forwards to the next chapters to see what else we will discover. Even though some explanations seem a bit sparse for my taste at first. The more you read everything starts to come together as the story progresses, keep on writing and all the best!

flow of the plot is so interesting and eargerly waiting for next chapters...?

the beginning of volume 1 was interesting to read and see the vast world created by the author, but the later volumes were a bit boring for me. even with more advanced gun, cannon and advanced ship technology  than other kingdoms they were still unable to defeat the enemy.

Just when she thought she had a handle on what Sir Zah and Lady Monika could do, they pull something new and ever more worrying from their… posterior. It was one thing for Sir Zah to boast being the absolute master of Wind magic…

Jason's hands tensed into fists. Before he took a deep breath and unclenched his hands. He was being made a fool of once again. Even if Siegfried had his chin out and was inches away there was no possible way a punch could land on him.

"I. what? I mean you... I'am the first Pokémon you can talk to, since like ever? Wow. I mean how did you live until now? I never met another human speaking Pokémon either so I guess we both are a bit confused and excited. I mean why only human? What are you anyway?"

what is troubling you? why the long sigh?

          I washed and kept the things I used after I ate then went back to my room. On my way there, I saw the two of them, sitting on the couch at the living room---kissing each other. I tried my best to hold back my tears until I reached my room. There I poured my heart out. Crying in silence; letting the breeze of the wind comfort me. I even cover my mouth with both hands to keep me from making any sobbing noise.