Fractured redemption - Reviews

The story was good but in the chapter 80-100 it get's boring. theres too many women and story fillers not much development of the main story, like it is too much fillers like I can't understand the story anymore. Don't get me wrong I loved the novel its just that in those chapters the story dried out.

Please don't push me past the edge, if another chapter is not published, I might really have to start reading it on lnmtl, I don't want to!! ??It's the wrong path of cultivation, don't make me do it please!

Here is my thought about this novel:Worldbuilding: So far what I read is quite interesting about talking about the games and some mechanics that will be very fascinating to watch in future events:Character: So far the character is fine especially Max and the design is somehow quite diverse. I also hope we can see furthermore about Max character in future events and the side charactersOverall, this novel have a great potential and that's all I have to say. Thank you and keep up the good work!!

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Pls join the fun and chill in a few tuiiiuyyuiiiiuyyt was a fun game but I bet it would get better if I had to wait let wait for it haha  was that he had to a good day he got a little bit better than I was at work lol i has a little fun little girl that he was doing so he just wanna snap and a

Interesting. It’s a nice take on humanity, very philosophical not to mention humanity as a whole being the protagonist. That makes it all the more interesting. A must read.

why why why why why why why why why why why its been a month since you haven't uploaded  a single chapter -_-* ?!   I don't know why are you stacking up the chapter i have completed 2 comic and i am waiting for them to upload a chapter . i am REALLY ANGRY!!!!!!!!!!!

hmmm I have read the synopsis and the reviews so im definitely gonna read this but I'll wait till a good chunk of chapters are piled up. i sincerely hope you will not drop the book midway. many great novels are dropped midway which is just pure torture

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I walked towards it and saw that they where both breathing but heavily injured so I place my hand on them and copy what Touma goes to heal people. Then I copy Katsuki's barrier to put around them. Then I notice the space behind me glowing...