@fallenblue I would like to say that I like reading your novel. It is a very good novel.I liked it how gio is the only guy for sofony and how she found a loophole in her first mission. Gio is a badass guy who is only good for sofony and I like how he is so possessive of her and care for her. I would like it if they have a romantic plot in the future. I like the system and the abilities it provide . I would like to watch sofony become immoral but in a good way...like doing bad stuff to only the bad people . And yeah the character development is great . Wendy's character is very good. And i liked thesexual content like between sofony and gio....and sexual scenes of felicity and that female gangster ...though I would like it better if they would be more descriptive in the future....as the sexual content is main in the story.But sofony should only be with gio....most of the readers would like it....Overall the novel is very good and most of the people would like reading it.
What makes this novel great in my opinions is the relationsship between the senior and junior. She obviously cares so much for him because of the life she lived prior to reincarnating and he's OP now because of the system but I don't know is he is the same person just w/o the system in her memories.
It has a good story development and background setting. It just that it has some minor problems with regards to the usage of symbol/sign like (period and coma). In terms of updating stability... please release more chapters.
It's a very interesting book with good development of characters so far. I like thar the story takes in a a world we are familiar with. It's a nice mix of scfi and magic. Looking forward to the next chapters
The first series Translation novel I have read. Consider having a good back story telling and pretty much detail on world background. Still far away from finishing it
After the thrilling climb, where Abel saved her life by catching her when she slipped, nearly falling to her death, the two got to know each other better, and they began to go on more thrilling adventures together.
