for mia - Reviews

It is written so well. Wabt more and more

this is a very good story.. .. good plot development ...... just the appropriate amount of everything ... .action, drama, ***, ect... i hope we get to see emotional development of character in upcoming chapters and this will be a perfect novel. ..EAGERLY WAITING FOR FURTHER UPDATES

The story and writing is really good. characters are interesting and early signs of world building shows promise. The only major problem is once you start paid chapters there are a lot of problems with inconsistency. titles, names, and gender pronouns switch and change frequently. This is a quality issue. I don't know what happened but this isn't acceptable.

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The story has Pokemon like pets along with cultivation which increases as pets become strong. The world building is great with lotmof variety of pets, different skill strengthened from training of pets. The MC is rational and story starts out well. What I like:There are no stupid young arrogant masters and needless conflictsThe fights are good.There is no stupid system which makes MC overpowered. The cheat cannot be really called a cheat too. He just can identify few stronger pets.There is no sudden powerful orMC being insanely kucky.This is the best story of the all trial reads. It's a notch higher than all pet stories translated here. Pkease vote for it instead of stupid senseless system story written by author with a IQ of a child.

oh. ... author kun u back with another story. Good good. .I just hope you don't torture poor xin as much as you did to poor aryan. Well I read initial chapters and I am impressed. You have improved a lot.  Nice introduction... ... .keep up the good work .

I nodded.

Lee Minho scoffed slightly. Hwang Jaejin admitted his feeling easily and it didn't surprise him that his best friend fell for the same girl as he did.

Even when transformed, Jenkins still retained some of his feminine features, like the dimples and glossy skin. Even his smile would almost make any uneducated guy follow along.

S came back from his dreamland to realise he was rubbing himself hard, he increased the rhythm of his hand  while picturing her and with a groan he let his sperm out, messing his hand and jeans. S cleaned himself whilst calming his heavy breathing down.

Right then, Leslie came and sat next to me.

"for a guy, you sure are manipulative but okay, see you at 9".