Very good novel, basically I have a negative idea of the genre and you will understand that I'm not a fan at all, that won't change. BUT ! You have not done what i often criticize in this genre, in other words something completely absurd and cliché, you are only taking up the codes of the genre by adding your originality to it and that is probably why I was caught in the story, however it’s too different from what I like to read in and general and that's why it won't be one of my classics. I can only make two comments to you and that’s to be careful with the way you bring information, I find that you are not subtle enough and that will only enrich the development of your characters and your intrigue which are already excellent and secondly pay attention to the structure of your sentences, I find it a little too compact and I have the impression that the actions follow one another too quickly sometimes. Otherwise I can only congratulate you for making me like an Idols novel, it's a feat, believe me! ?
