Firstborn again - Reviews

I truly enjoyed this series. We’ll written and the story line was amazing. I look forward to reading your other books!

This is a spin off from his other current novel revolving around a side character of one of its arcs. Very talented author and very engrossing novel full if suspense and adventure. That being said, when you approch the latest chapters you are going to be extremely disappointed when you discover the last 10 chapters are just repeat chapters and chapters from his other novel. One can only speculate the author has no intention of fixing this error or continuing the novel, as more than two months have past since the last update.

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After reading the rest of the free chapters I no longer have any interest or hope in this novel and it quality and it chances to improve the translation quality. I probably could edit better than this

A unique cultivation novel and better than most generic ones. Easy to read, not that many grammar errors, and an interesting protagonist to follow is the equation for a good novel. Keep it up, Author LOABA! >3

Sinceramente espero que no llegue a monetizar con esa longitud de capítulo será un suplicio para el que se arriesgué a seguir está obra .

"Sarang, look at me." Chinhwa's eyes were red like he wanted to cry, but he held it in, tightly grasping onto Sarang's hand.

"Sayonara (goodbye)," whispered Harold as with a wave of his hands the spear shot toward the Cthulhu's projection. The creature sensing the danger from the spear that was the embodiment of positive emotions coiled itself with its tentacles as protection.

The driver paralyze in fear had no idea what to do, and everyone who saw what happened started murmuring.

" I keep staring because you intrigue and amuse me" - Masked being

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

Only shooting stars break the mold