First Rebel Lord - Reviews

Ok i'm going to have to drop it right here this is a quality novel with a great idea but unfortunately the translation quality is very bad the formation the wording all around bad don't get me wrong you can read this but its quite hard

Overall, it's pretty good and definitely a fun read. The system isn't the most helpful or very complex but I'm still in the early stages of the story. Instead of flooding readers with a bunch of information, the author makes the smart choice to push on with the narrative.Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters. The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.

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Posting another review because apparently I made the auto-mod mad.This novel is one of my favorite novels. Chapters are long, good, and the cliffhangers don't make me want to murder someone. MC is anti-harem (I think), and the side characters all have their 'thing' (I'm looking at you Bromur with your Mr. Krabbs laugh)

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His words seemed to trigger something in Annie as she immediately understood what he meant, "I just gotta pet it's belly, since it's a magic sword, use magic."

This is definitely the first and last time they are coming here.

Suddenly he grabbed my wrist and pulled my forward leaning his body onto mine as he pulls me a little up with his hands on my ways.

"Breakfast is done" mom from kitchen called knowing we will together fall on bed soon .

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Roswell notices a military truck, containing Imperial infantry at the back.

"There was an upcoming subjugation raid ok the southern part near the Village of Urf. I want you to become a vice-lieutenant for that time and leave your buddy to do his work here" He said while checking others reports.