Fate's Rapture - Reviews

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I believe this novel used to be hosted on another site (maybe veratales or liberspark?). I remember reading it until around chapter 150. It wasn't that bad, but I decided to put off reading it until it had more chapters or was completed.

The opening is very intriguing, good word building, well thought plot, characters are well immersed in the storyline, I recommend this novel, good work author, waiting for more chapters.

Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars! Here's what you can expect:The GoodThe story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal.Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent.Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel heheThe BadPacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work onNo romance...POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better.There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this tooAll in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!

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This is a seriously great novel. Gotta love the main lead and even the way all the other characters relate to him. If you have ever watched rick and morty, this is seriously similar. The rick is complete eith portals and a dubious moral compass as he manipulates his morty. The morty is completely pulled along for the ride. They have their little spats where the morty tries to separate himself and do some good in the world. But in the end he is pulled along for all the escapades, he even occasionally lets loose old women who then proceed to destroy stuff.10/10 novel. Only improvement could be 30 chaps/day.

I really thought this story was deleted. It was in my library and it seems that I can't read it. (Been away for a year) And then I found the announcement chapter and yeeeeees. Followed again ??

i rally really really like this novel so far. it has a nice blend of funny moments and story progression in it. overall i think it is a good read.

Or is it simply me overthinking it again.

Tei and I jumped back. This was a ruins. What on earth could be down here that's lived this long? Unless, these ruins were not abandoned. We heard yelling coming from above. We found a crevice and stuffed ourselves there, just a little close for comfort, and turned our lights off.  We breathed as quietly as possible as we heard feet coming down the stairs.

"STOP! DO YOU DARE CRIPPLE HER?"