Fated to the devourer - Reviews

Having a hard time putting the book down. Enjoyable read.

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im gonna Read It Later Nice Fist Chapter ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

      This book is off to a great start so far...    I’m looking forward to the erotic details and sex senes. Male lead seems like a great guy to have in bed, if you know what I mean... lol.

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I felt like I've read this novel before...must be my imagination.                                                                        

I would not recommend this novel.The world building is decent and is a standard xianxia world. The MCs backstory is actually good and him being older in his previous life is a plus for me. The main problem I have is the sloppy plot progression as the MC is led around by his nose by all the charecters around him and seems to be thrown around left and right the minute he gets sent into the world.The other main problem I have is how shallow and poor the charecter development is of the MC as he is supposed to be a 60 year old man previously and have experience with xianxia novel and still falls face first into every cliche he possibly could.As of chapter 13, I cant see this story making enough changes for me to change my recommendation of not recommending this novel to other readers.

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I came in to this book having a great expectations and I came out of this book thinking that the author needed to proof read cause what they got now has to be fixed . Ive read the first few chapters and i still think I have the right to say the author needs to fix the book . The author instead of having the mc tag along with the bronze knoght should have had him follow along with the girl and so he could grow along with the girl and get more powerful with her so that would be good character  Development  . Also the mc is so attached to the firl even though he hardly knows who she is He is idiotic and I hate it . I recommend  Anyone who stumbles upon this review to not read the book this book looks good at first glance . But it turns into an absolute  Dumspter fire later and if you think im just trash talking  Go look at other reviews Its a  1/10 i recommend you to find a better novel instead  Of this

This is a pretty good novel if you interested in just enjoying the novel and not so much the details, if it your kind a style then it’s definitely worth a chance.

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Though early to review, the stage for novel is set. It has a big background and if this novel goes on it will even go to intergalactic war. MC and FL are eternal lovers hated by the god realm as FL belongs to devil realm. MC went through 9 rebirths so that they can be free from god realm and start new. Now they are together. Apart from two very few characters are shown. MC and FL belong to dragon family abandoned in some world coz enemies were gonna kill them. An old man adopted them when he found the newborns alone in a hut. We have 2 other children that are royalty and finally a dragon god who messed up a lot in past. MC and FL have good personality matching their past. Currently they are 5 yrs old. A lot of details about past wars are mentioned which led the world as of we know. If the novel continues this is gonna have one epic action with good wars. I guess MC and FL gonna fight against the god realm for all they suffered and meanwhile people might not stomach them coz of their talents. Plus other galaxies might attack again the god realm.So I suggest people to give it a go. All details will be explained again in future if it looks complicated to people according to author.... Keep going author.